Score: 6

"not bad"

by: Deathdream

date: July 9, 2009

your fights a re rather short for intense ninjas but it is refreshing to see a sprite movie not pull a dragonball combat on us. Honestly I think you should have a friend look at the text for your movie (at least your next piece) before finishing it, a second pair of eyes can do wonders. I got bored with it but there isn't any real challenge for your characters here so it is understandable. Hope to catch the next installment. Oh and on a last note, music may be something to help keep the audience interested.

Score: 2

"not that great....."

by: DrGiggles

date: July 8, 2009

You should really do grammer checks.

Score: 3

"Wow..."

by: Kinger

date: July 8, 2009

2 things:

Invest in a spellchecker, for that matter... invest in a grammar checker too.

I was bored by then end.... its a bit cheesey and started off slow, then got slower.

Not gonna blam it, because its not bad for being done by an 8 year old, but damn...'

1/5 3/10

Score: 3

"Well..."

by: finalomega

date: July 8, 2009

The overall idea was a good one, but there are a number of flaws with your flash that detract from the overall performance.

The usage of sprites was pretty well done and the backgrounds were good choices as well. There was a small amount of background music, otherwise the flash was pretty much devoid of any sound aside from the occasional battle effect.

What really killed it for me was your poor spelling. You should have typed up the script and spell-checked it before you decided to put it into the flash. Never underestimate the power of good spelling and grammar... the lack of it can be ruining.

Like I said, I liked the overall idea, but there are a lot of improvements that need to be made. Good luck on you next flash submission.

Score: 0

"Too pointless"

by: AceBladewing

date: July 8, 2009

The plot seemed lacking. You should work on developing an actual story and less on just random fighting.