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Zone-man trying to save the day form zoney, again, yah...
I would like advice from any one whothiks they should commet
This took me about 2 and a half weeks.
Where exactly do I start...
It, uh...didn't completely suck. Not as bad as the first one. But you need a better story, or at least better characters, while "zoneman" himself isn't bad, it needs more interaction to the action.
I'd say for your second flash, the animation's pretty good. So keep it up.
But I'm afraid that with a name like animationgod, I expected more. so you get a five for good effort.
I'm also afraid you can't be animationgod...we already have one. His name is Mark, aka, alvin earthworm.
And either go with rampant sound effects, or no sound effects.
If you're going to go with just music and ass-kicking, You might want to spend more than 2-3 weeks on a project at a time. Otherwise, get some real story in there, and some other enemy besides orbs.
Because right now, I'm watching this at least half decent attempt at storytelling and animation thinking, who/what the fuck are these things and why should I care?
And yes, I judge flashes the same way I judge cinema.
If you were james cameron, I'd be kicking your ass right now.
Thanks for review.
I totally agree on who the real master is...(Alvin Earthworm), matter of fact he's who inspired me to even do flash, back to the point.
Yah I have trouble doing sound effects and even getting decent ones but hopefully I do better in the future.
And for the next zone-mus (witch hasn't come out abvioulsly cause Im trying to improve my skills deaply before making it) will have more than robotic balls and hopefully a story line witch will tell it's self.
If I could learn how to use action script 3.0 I believe is what I have then I could alow viewers to progress through scens to let them taki in the story better instead of giving a split second to see it.
Thanks again for the review.
i thought it was great but you could of put some windows & stuff in the back ground other than that it was awesome
eehmmm, yeah not bad
not bad, not bad, but try to put more details concentrate on that part forget about the effects for a while, it's just asuggestion dude, but the move isn't bad, nice work
its good but
You should use other stick people instead of robotic balls. It would make it more exciting since your flash skills aren't that great yet. After a while it was tedious to watch a stick figure killing balls.
The audio wasn't that bad. In the future if you can instead of giving a prologue have voice acting tell the story.
Hope I helped.
Thats what I am going to try with my next zone-mus, it might turn out differnt than I think though, anyways thanks. I might be doing a sprite movie next time.
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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