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Jul 7, 2009 | 4:07 PM EDT

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10 reasons for me to be happy!

Alright, this is a short short, my best flash so far, I think. I recorded the voice a long time ago (I have a much deeper and manlier voice now, I promise), and found the soundfiles on my computer last week. I thought it was pretty funny so I decided to animate to it. And I LOVE the result.

This is going to be my last mouse drawn submission, since it's my birthday soon. Bamboo here I come!! :3 Also, it's not as animative great as I promised Rutger, but I think it looks good. And I lowered my smoothing, just as you told me, Fawx. Also, "Expand Movie" looks very good on this one. Nice widescreeny mjau! :D

Everything happens really fast, it might be a good idea to watch it again if you didn't understand. And it's good thing if you've seen Sin City. Hartigan-pic (C) by Frank Milla.

Cheers. Reviews are warmly welcome!

Reviews


KylersKylers

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Very funny

Well done, make more and script them better.


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HolyKonni responds:

I don't think I will, but thanks for the 10!


assjoeassjoe

Rated 4 / 5 stars

I liked it

That was fun. Where are you from? You had a bit of an accent :D


HolyKonni responds:

I'm from Germany :3


thelittleemothelittleemo

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Oddly funny

That was oddly amusing. The only thing that I think you should work on is your animation, but since you're getting the bamboo tablet then I'm sure it'll be much better!


HolyKonni responds:

Thanks. You're the first emo I like!!


j4ke002j4ke002

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

LOL

It dissapointed me when he died and he didnt even get half way through the list, but it was funny and it made me laugh! Good Work!



SlackmanSlackman

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Cute

The audio on this is pretty funny. The visuals are pretty good, but they could use a little bit of work.

There are times in this when you use a vibrating effect. It looks like you're cycling through two frames very quickly. What I'd recommend is adding a third frame and slowing it down by adding another frame into each picture. This will make things look less violent and strange.

Honestly, most of the rest of my advice is to move on from the mouse and practice with the tablet a bit more. Your characters could be a bit cleaner, but I'm going to blame that on the mouse and hope that you can produce something a bit cleaner with the bamboo. You might want to experiment with a thinner line, or even using the pencil tool. Either would help make the drawings look a little better.

Your extremes are well done though, and while I'd complain that the cartoon is a little short and the ending is pretty random, I will say that it didn't overstay it's welcome. Rather it was short and sweet and pretty funny.

Good luck, and I look forward to seeing what you produce in the future.


HolyKonni responds:

Wow! Nice review! Thanks for the tips, I'll defenitly think of that when I make my next flash.