Score: 10

"LOL"

by: likitty

date: July 5, 2009

i can give blow jobs good

Score: 6

"One thing"

by: oversword

date: July 5, 2009

Having a quick look at the actual comic it has become very apparent that is a biographical comic, therefore when you say "This is just how I hope the story pans out in the comic!" you actually wish the main charachter to get a blow job and then make a comic about it....
I would recommend animating more relevant stories or asking the ceator of this comic if you could animate some of his work.
Seeing as it's a biographical comic what you would be doing is a moving vresion of a still image which has been taken from real moving life. What i'm saying is it's wierd to animate specificaly this comic, it's like your animating someone's life who you don't know.
Maybe you could just make your own animated comic instead.
Your style is good and apparanty you have some good ideas of what people on the internet want to see.
Sorry for being a bit long-winded.

Score: 6

"Righteo."

by: 2good2b4goten

date: July 5, 2009

On the plus side this was pretty well animated. Damn right perverted but that's what Newgrounds is.

Good job, add some sound next time.

Score: 7

"Very nice.."

by: fox-noob

date: July 5, 2009

pretty nice.. i like it..well done!!

Score: 3

"I think you have some problems..."

by: Nerd-02

date: July 5, 2009

Let me get this straight, you read this comic online and liked it, so you animated some of the characters having sex? You made your account today and named it "allanfan69". I think your a bit obsessed.

Other then that the art was good and similar to the comic actually. Your animation was also very smooth and well done. Though you could have probably animated some of the actual comics instead of make a fan fiction sex scene.

If you plan on making any more animations about this comic that's what I would suggest doing. Though make sure you always credit the creator of the comic so you don't get in trouble. Also, some nice background music would be great.