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You should make some new screams like record em yourself. I mean common those are the most overplayed screams
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I was planning on doing a Michael Bay style of the Fourth of July but I thought that I could never do the guy justice after watching one of his films. I did this in celebration of Independence Day. The day our fore fathers decided that "Enough is enough and its time for a change." I know I got that from a Canadian, Owen Hart. God rest his soul.
With this I just want to wish everyone a Happy Independence Day and yes there were firecrackers harmed in the making of this short.
Nice idea...
And nice animation too but a few things bothered me:
The backround sounds were too loud and the main sounds were loud too.
I think that he should say something too like: "Please have mercy" or something like that.
k 3 things
1. thats not a firecracker, thats a rocket. very different
2. framerate was way off and out of detail on the wicklighting
3.sound was waaaaaaaay to repetitive
not trying to be an ass but this had it's flaws.. its big flaws
My ears...
God, the repetition of the sound effects were annoying and horribly done.
Needed a little frame by frame work such as the wick and firecracker movement.
Other than that, it looked like it would of been a nice animation if it wasn't so horribly annoying.
nice
had a few C&C death screams in it....i like it
