Score: 8

"Pretty good"

by: MultiCanimefan

date: July 19, 2009

Randomness combined with humor is always a treat, and this is no exception.

The animation, while basic, was well done and smooth for the most part. The sound was also fitting for the flash, keeping it synced with the animation.

I also enjoyed the "paper-like" background for a few of the scenes, very nice.

What I would suggest is that you remove the dogs, but draw them instead in order to have everything really fit into the flash.

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Score: 9

"I love choclate!"

by: Haggard

date: July 18, 2009

Pretty random flash at times but with some really funny scenes (I especially liked the "choclate"-scene because I actually understood what was written on the wall. :D ).

The music was good and you managed to keep the flash synced with it, so that music and flash went together pretty nicely.

The only things I didn't like was the pictures of the dogs moving around (this looked really really bad) and the abrupt ending. Maybe a little fade out of the music would look and sound better here.

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Score: 9

"Pretty Good"

by: JKMonkey

date: July 15, 2009

Good job with this one bro, really enjoyed watching it. Though I really loved the Audio, which really seemed to fit in with what was going on in the flash, and it sounded cool as well, good job with that.

The animation here was ok, some of it better than others, like the people, they looked good, however in one scene you just put pictures of dogs and had the pictures move around, that didnt look good. It was kind of hit or miss with this category in your flash, you did a good job overall however.

If I had one problem with this one it would be that it ended to abruptly, almost like a Sopranos-esque ending, I think you could have made it better if it were to gradually fade out. Try that for your next one.

Excellent work here man, 5/5 from me, keep up the great work! :)

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Score: 8

"Not too shabby."

by: Fro

date: July 14, 2009

~ Animation/Graphics ~

Some were decent and some were alright. None of them were extremely good or amazing, but nothing bad at all. The frame by frame looked a bit odd when you did the pixels. The wavy effect that you used during that one just seemed very out of place and didn't look too great.

~Story/Content ~

A nice demo reel showcasing your work. Some weren't the best, but all of them were ones that would do pretty decent on newgrounds in my opinion. A submission with a storyline/plot with your talent may go a long ways and a series would be even better. Hopefully I see you doing some stuff like that in the future.

One thing that I didn't like about your submission was the way it ended so fast. Such an abrupt manner of stopping a flash that I wasn't ready for in any way. Try to ease into that a bit better by maybe fading out on a longer scene.

~ Audio ~

Decent background music and nothing really to critique here at all. Good job on this part of the flash.

~ Overall ~

Adding more work to this to make it longer and stopping it from ending so abruptly would help it out a lot in my opinion.

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Score: 7

"Good work"

by: Coop83

date: July 13, 2009

It's still a little basic in places, but I think that you've definitely got a gift for animation. I'd have suggested that you use a different image for the menu, as without that pixelated image, you'd have been able to show off a better side of your drawing skills.

With how the different animations work, you've got a talent that you need to nurture and bring to the next level. Getting some good plot lines sorted will give you something to head towards and perhaps a few 'bytesize' style cartoons would get you sorted for the next demo reel, or even a series.

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