Score: 4
"Well you gotta start somewhere...."
date: July 4, 2009
Hey at least your trying man.
Don't listen to half the douches below. It's not that bad. Pretty much all the advice given below is what I have to offer.
A whole song would make things a hell of a lot better, but I'm sure you've already realised that mistake.
The animation is pretty good. I like the texture and your overall drawing style... even though theres only 4 picutres in the entire flash. Good on you for trying to lip syncing it wasn't half bad, and with practice you could become quite good.
Just hang in there man. Keep submitting, but put a lot more effort and time into these things. You have to make sure everything is to you satisfaction. "It'll do" is not the attitude to have. "Yeah that's good, but maybe I can improve it by..." is the mindset you want. Good job man. Your getting there. And congrats on the tablet.
July 6, 2009
Author's Response:
Thankyou!!!
