Johnny Salem Ep 1 Part 1 by tcoffin



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Submitted: 07/04/2009 | 04:26AM EST

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--PART TWO IS UP! GO WATCH IT HERE:
http://www.newgrounds.com /portal/view/502164--

Well, here it is. The "Re-mastered" version of Johnny Salem Episode 1 part 1.

After submitting the previous version, everyone gave it bad to mediocre reviews. However, they also gave me a lot of constructive criticism. And i took it to heart.

I made the animation much more fluid (if you don't think it's that fluid here, then you would die if you saw how choppy it was the last time.) Also, I fixed up the bullets of Johnny's guns (I think... God, i hope they're better.) Also, I added a few extra touches, like blinking and speeding lines on rotating tires. I hope this pleases people more than the last one. Look forward to part two coming soon, if this one gets passed.

I made this by drawing everything by hand with pencil and paper, inked it, then scanned it in to the computer where I colored and animated it in flash.

SYNOPSIS:
Johnny Salem is a man who has dedicated his life to protecting good humans and good wiccans from evil wiccans (aka, witches, in layman's terms,) and evil humans. He travels the land, fighting these people, while searching for the one warlock that caused a tragedy to befall him in his past. However, when Johnny finally finds that said warlock, he learns that there is much more at stake than he could ever have imagined, as he must face his darkest fears and memories to save the world as we know it.

Special thanks to Rob Hooley and Adam Mack for their voice talents!
Hope you like!
-Trent

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Average Score: 5.6 / 10

Score: 8
rednikaiaG

"Well, I gotta say. . ."

date: August 3, 2009

You certainly got my curiousity going, tcoffin------>
I love the voice of Johnny. It's a very rustic burly tone, with a hint of vengeance! Heh heh heh Oh and that's a pretty interesting storyline as well. Ya don't see TOO much of that kind of stuff around here. At least, not that I'VE seen anyway. I never saw the original but this one is A.O.K. I'm going over to watch your second one right now. I DO wanna know what 'ole Johhny gets into next time. Witches and Wiccans and Hunters, oh my! Until your next episode. . .

...........Take care, be good and witches, beware of Johnny Salem.period

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Score: 6
n-nnnn

"ive seen worse"

by: n-nnnn
date: July 4, 2009

its alright.
the drawing isnt that great, the animations ok.
but it would look alot better if instead of using the pencil tool.
either use the line tool for straight things like doors etc.
or the paintbrush itd make it look alot better.

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Score: 7
silenttorture

"pretty good"

date: July 4, 2009

I've never seen the first one but this one looks interesting- I will be waiting for the next episode

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Score: 4
Sci-Fi

"you drew this by hand"

by: Sci-Fi
date: July 4, 2009

i give you props for that. but this still has a lot of problems, mostly visual

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Score: 3
axman53095

"very cliche but heres my view non the less"

date: July 4, 2009

u need to do some more reasearch there sir pagans also pratice what would be know as witch craft as do deuidic people to all good and yeah we get irratated at the killings of the christian church at least u did not make all of us bad 3 for effort next time do your reasearch and then make a flash graphics lack story line is very short does not hook ya in right away try to make a hook thats not overly cliche

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