Score: 5
"Interesting"
date: July 4, 2009
You show great potential for flash. There are a couple points of interest I'd like to touch base. First, your voice acting could use some work. Except for the growling demons (I believe that's what they were), all of your characters sounded too much alike. I couldn't tell 'James Dean' from 'David', or even the as-of-yet nameless person for that matter. Second, you should add a preloader to your movies. That way, when you start making your future flash longer, your movies and such will have the chance to fully load before playing. Otherwise, you'll run into problems in the future with movies freezing up so thatthey can load more before the movie begins to play again. And third, it looked to me that some frame skipping has occured a couple times in the movie. At one point, the nameless person's head is without the body when he enters the car. And when they jump down the hatch to 'David', the background briefly, but noticeably, goes completely white. It would help you later on to make sure that every frame works as they should, lest you leave scraps for hawk-eyed critics to chew on. I offer this friendly advice in the hopes that your animating and voice acting skills improve so that you can become a great expert with flash.
