Score: 6
"Funny, but needs some polish."
date: July 4, 2009
The basic plot of the story is funny and so is the animation. Like when Seed needs to make all the money if 12 hours and you have that montage and he's doing stupid shit, it's pretty funny.
However, the audio is a little off. It sounds like it's low quality. Make sure you make the audio sound as crisp and clear as possible, especially for voices.
Another thing that sucked was that the subtitles was over your website name. It made it really hard to read. If you want people to visit your website add a link to it in the bottom corner or something. You also say the N word a lot. I hope you're black because if not that's pretty offensive. Maybe tone it down a bit?
Finally, you have two play buttons. One on the preloader, then when you press that it shows the episode title then another play button. Figure out a way to only have one.
July 4, 2009
Author's Response:
haha n***aaa n***a n***aaaaaa, you think i chose to have sitty voices? nah, i just got a mic and no matter which one i get they all suck. So what the fuck am i gonna do? Spend $2,000 on an apple computer? I'm not seed you know. The Sub tites are clear so maybe you need glasses perhaps? Go to a doctor. But thanks for the review n***aa. Oh and for the n***a thing.. The seeds not white and KingPins a drug dealer, try telling one of them to watch there mouth, see how that goes. And about the play button is it to much to ask for you the click your mouse one more time??
