Eulogy For: DailyCollab #2
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07/03/09 – 07/06/09
This is the second installment of my new series, "DailyCollab." I spent, like 6 hours straight making this movie, so I hope you like it.
In this flash, I'm using a different drawing style because today's theme is "Pencil." Tomorrow's theme is "4th of July."
It's exactly 1,152 frames animated at 24 frames per second.
Runtime: 0:44
Oh, and PLEASE watch the whole thing before voting. thx!
SOUNDTRACK:
"Everything's Just Wonderful" by Lily Allen
!!!IMPORTANT!!!! EDIT: right when it's done loading, click 'play' right away, coz if u wait for a while THEN click 'play', the thing gets all messed up >:(
EDIT: ok, the problem w/ the preloader has REALLY been bugging me, so i changed it. now i'll see if it's any better.
EDIT:sorry, i think tehre has been a problem with the ActionScript, so when it's done laoding, just close it and re-open it. thx!
I like the animation style, but it could use a lot of improvement. I'm not sure if the use of color at the end was intended to be some kind of artistic expression, but it was a nice touch. However, work on the art a bit and develop the story a bit more. The title "DailyCollab" is a bit misleading, since there clearly isn't any collaboration involved. This movie could also use a "replay" button. Keep working on your skills.
You need people for it to be a collab
These are decent random little shorts and I think they are alright.
so this is okay, smooth, but thats about it. theres no plot, not that you need one if your animation is good but sadly thats not one of your your strong points theres no actual character movement, just a drawing
so yeah
work on that
What the hell was that? Seriously.
how long do you spend 1 day?
not to be rude but...
Try giving the guy a break if he actually does a new one everyday, jeez
wow i can do better than that!
dude you should spend way more time on an animtion. but that's only if you want it to acually look good. obviously you dont!
That flash has potenetial but u didnt put in enough effort
idk y im co authored... i didnt do ANY of this or anything on dailycollab #2 and they both are WAY to similar... i didnt care for the last two dailycollabs and i absoulutely DID NOT help... so therefore there not collabs. i ALSO made an agreement with golf232... it strictly said that you MUST agree on themes, plots, and characters... WE DIDNT!!!! I didnt decide on the roadtrip thing... golf232 decided on it ALL actually... im actually about to quit this collab thing because it is clearly NOT fair. And ANOTHER reason why its not a collab is because there are not two or more parts. And the last rule of our agreement was that we must make a variety of animations... NOT REALLY HAPPINING!!! So hopefully i have made a point... and just so i dont get banned... ill give constructive criticism: it was ok but i think it needs to be different. i think you should be more versitalle with the animations you do and do more things that are not similar to this... as well as i think you should delete the last two collabs that you did because their not rly collabs... if they are collabs we must work together so THERE... thats wat i think about this animation and the one before this...
