Score: 3

"And now I am going to search for revenge"

by: lustful-dolli

date: July 4, 2009

Voice acting is obviously sounds like its done by one person trying to manipulate his voice into 2 different characters with an odd lisp. LOL
my eye twitched 0_<

The voice acting is kind of annoying and the animation relies on that and the captions
.....so odd I didn't get through the whole vid

Score: 8

"I think you should do what your good at"

by: darthduba

date: July 4, 2009

The voice acting is poor and the backgrounds are aswell. But the fighting scenes are above decent. I think you could do very well at making battlevideos, without long stories behind it. Just place a nice beat behind it and there you have a nice video.

Greetz Duba

Score: 8

"hmmm..."

by: Tozze

date: July 4, 2009

Well... u are gonna have a big + for the fighting scenes and the action. i really liked the action scenes. the story wasnt bad either but to long way to show it. it would been enough with a text where the whole story was explained and you could have shown like just pictures or small animations in the side. well i really liked the characters and the fighting scenes. but it would been better if you made a new story, where it was more fighting and less takling. and maybe better sound effects and better blood. but then it would make a great series. I REALLY liked the action scenes so keep em up. but i wouldnt mind making a new story with more action and more like brutal action more blood more people getting killed. maybe like a new era of diffrent madness :d

Score: 5

"Not too great."

by: jakenator85

date: July 3, 2009

.:ups:.
Ok coloring
Worth watching
Ok animation

.:downs:.
Bad grammer
Good syncing, then gets bad
Audio could be better

.:comments:.
This isn't the worst thing in the world, but a lot better could have been done. The grammer wasn't good for start. It was synced up pretty good, but then it wasn't synced up at all. And also, the audio could've been smoother. Sounded like maybe you were talking too close to the mic. It's not all bad though, the coloring was alright, the animation was ok, just a little shaky though, and it was worth watching. It wasn't boring, so that's why I watched it. 2/5, 5/10, try a little harder next time. I always recommend watching the flash first before you upload it, that way, you know if there are any problems before hand.