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I like your style of animation. It feels more original than most on Newgrounds. My favorite part was when Slick was standing and Evil Slick and was kicking him repeatedly. I looked like he was tap dancing on his chest (and made me laugh which is always good).
My only suggestion is to work on your Flash menus. The text for all of the options (including the play button, the Menu Selection buttons, and the Scene Select buttons) to not have the text either cut off in mid-word to the next line OR have them overlapping. It really doesn't say much for a Flash artist if the menu isn't visually pleasing. I would have given you an 8 if the menu was better constructed. Keep it in mind for next time =)

Score: 9

"Amazing"

by: tomtastic

date: July 3, 2009

I really enjoyed watching that, i noticed how you did things intime with the music and it was all interesting and enjoyable to watch. My only criticism is at the menu screen where the text by the buttons are like:
Pla
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which was a shame because its a good lil film you made and that small problem kind of makes a bad impression that it wont be that great. But it is good so, well done!

Score: 8

"nice"

by: jente666666

date: July 3, 2009

nice flash. it was really good for your first flash so....
great job. can't wait to see the next one.
which thing did you used to make this?
the text behind the buttons were a little mixed up.
try to fix that.

Score: 8

"I expect great things"

by: Escapesqrd

date: July 3, 2009

The movie was great only problem for me was the main menu was crowded and hard to read. but stick with flash i have a feeling ill be seeing great things from you in the future.

Score: 7

"Yeah...good job"

by: Don-L

date: July 3, 2009

Well...the buttons in the menu weren't good (the letters were too big), the shoes of slick were transparent, and the cracks at the beginning of the movie were strange (the lines changed it's shape). These are some quite obvious things to fix but I'm telling you then anyway in case you are distracted.
And sometimes the action was too fast to appreciate, but like this it fitted to the music, so I'll not complain about it. Good animation, good music, had some quallity, here's your 7.

Score: 10

"Fucking awesome!"

by: Matt2k8

date: July 3, 2009

That was awesome! Did you use the bone tool? I'm trying to learn to use it. And it's really hard. You used the tool so well. Exelent effects.

Overall: Good job.

Score: 8

"Did you resubmit this?"

by: Lazyfeet

date: July 3, 2009

or is it just deja vu?

Anyways, really good. Bit jolty in places but otherwise, you've certainly succeeded in your challenge.

Score: 5

""GHAAAAASTLY"! Poke'ball go!"

by: SinRiddenSoul

date: July 3, 2009

It was alright. Pretty decent animation. But the enemies looked to much like Poke'mon to me for some reason. I expected to be hit by a barrage of Poke'voices saying "GHASTLY!" and whatnot. But good job.

Score: 10

"Very entertaining."

by: Molotov

date: July 3, 2009

This was a great flash,i loved the intro a lot and the whole flash was very entertaining to watch,the main character had a simple design but was still drawn very well considering the fast pace movement with all the dark creatures and then it got very impressive when he dueled a dark version of himself,i thought you did a great job on this flash and i think you deserve a 10 my good man. =)

Score: 0