Score: 5
"Ha, boobs."
date: July 2, 2009
Well this is pretty decent for your second go.
I suggest in the future you recreate your characters to better suit animation. You've drawn them in such a way that it would be very difficult to create fluent animation and because of that you've resulted to moving limbs in blocky rotations. I also noticed this with the book opening at the beginning.
Try more simple characters and incorporate some more frame by frame into your animation, it'll make it look much smoother.
The storyline was all right, needs a little work but I guess it's your own story.
Overall for your second animation this was good. Don't get me wrong it could use some work but these are things you'll pick up as you begin to animate more and more.
I expect good things from you! Best of luck!
July 3, 2009
Author's Response:
The characters aren't complicated. Maybe the limbs need to be redrawn. (already made new palms ) Next time I will motion tween to get more fluent animation.
