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This was just me being an idiot to bring bck sprite a day. go watch my other stuff, not this.
I just noticed this.
Not sure why I've never seen this before, but to get to the point:
This movie's terrible, for just about every reason imagineable.
Graphics aren't the most important aspect of a movie, but they are meant to be appealing to the eye and set a standard for the movie's presentation. To be blunt, the graphics here are atrocious. I've rarely seen artwork this messy in my lifetime, and the dull color choice didn't make it any easier to look at. I'm not sure how long you've been making Flash, but you should work on improving your animation skills.
The sound quality is... inconsistent. Some of the voices, like diamond-armada's acting and the voice clip from my movie, are clear and don't require subtitles. Other voices are either unnaturally quiet or packed full of static like the voices in the Sprite-A-Day series, making them impossible to understand. To whoever contributed to the latter, get a better microphone or learn more about voicework. Or both, if necessary.
And now, down to the worst part, the writing. The only joke that was relevant to anything was the opening gag when I was smashed with a wrecking ball but then it didn't make any sense. It's like you dropped the idea of defending Sprite-A-Day with good points and decided to throw a bunch of random phrases and memes all over the place. Perhaps you were trying to mimick the quality of the Sprite-A-Day series with the mediocre, jejune, nonsensical jokes? I don't even know.
I don't dislike this movie because it supposedly bashes the views of my Sprite-A-Rant Flash. I dislike this movie because it was so shoddy and unorganized that I couldn't even tell in the end whether you were really defending the Sprite-A-Day series or you were just being sarcastic with all of your comments.
While I do hope you work on bettering your art, your sound, and your writing, I will say that it's great the sound wasn't out of sync and it at least wasn't so repulsive that I didn't watch the whole movie before making this review. For that, I give you a generous score 4 out of 10.
I was just being half-assed with this, I can draw much better without a tablet on pen and paper.
This video has almost nothing to do with Sprite-A-Day. I was expecting a video with reasons of why the series is good and why JonBro is wrong (I don't think he is though), but this was just stupid.
i will never do something this shiity again
I HAD A PIGON AD IT EXPLODED IN MY ASS!
instant 10 XD
Oh boy somebody made a flash against your shitty award stealing series lets make a counter attack yep yep.
As another note, the graphics are pretty bad, even for a movie with no tweens, the voice acting is horrible, the humor was terrifyingly awful and your defending a flash series that reuses the SAME overused jokes over and over.
You make me ashamed to even like video games.
I agree with this flash on how Sprite A Day is a very fun flash series even though the animation wasn't great the point that was made was nice,good job. =)
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