Score: 9

"TNEJ (art collab"

by: OhMyGawd

date: July 31, 2009

the music made me happy XD im gunna leave this window up to listen to it forevur it really fits with the story makes it seem like a dream kinda thing kinda like when you read the story of rosalina in galaxy or the opening cutscene of kingdom hearts ... well thats what it reminded me off anyway XD great story :-) was a very good idea and it was pretty funny at times

Score: 6

"Average effort"

by: Haggard

date: July 12, 2009

I like that the story is put together by so many different artists. This is a pretty interesting concept.

The art itself is aveage and very rough around the edges, so a little more effort and time spent on the drawings would be good here.

What bothers me the most with this submission is that so much space is wasted with unnecessary things. It's a nice idea that you tried to imitate the NG flash pop ups, but it isn't really necessary as the pop up windows always look that way on their own. As a result we now have a double frame and the text is sometimes so small that it's very hard to read.

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Score: 6

"Average"

by: MultiCanimefan

date: July 11, 2009

I enjoyed the story, and even more so because it was put together by many different artists. It was coherent and easy to follow.

The artwork could use some work and polishing around the edges, but it's not that big of an issue for me because every artist has his/her own different style. However, some more effort would have been appreciated.

Besides being a very creative project, the audio was soothing and pleasant to listen to and went well enough with the artwork.

Next time, though, especially since this one wasn't animated, polish up the artwork a bit.

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Score: 5

"Nice Idea"

by: Metal-Therapy

date: July 10, 2009

I think this would be best summed up as an interesting concept that's a little rough around the edges.
I have mixed feelings about the artwork. On one hand, it is very diverse -seeing a whole array of artistic style and ability sewn together was pretty neat. It almost reminded me of a childrens book (with dicks XD). But on the other hand, it did tend to clash a little bit, visually.
Overall, I'd have to side with creativity here. Though not as polished as I would have liked, this was certainly very creative and diverse.

I really liked the idea of a single story patched together like a quilt by several different authors, but I think it could have been executed a little better. The randomness of the story did possess a humorous quality, but it was just too sketchy for my taste.

I think combining this unique method of storytelling from a storybook style to a traditional animation collab would be a cool idea. Maybe generate a story using several different authors and have one animator meld it together visually. It might be kind of a frankenstein, but it would be interesting to see, nonetheless. :P

Overall, I did enjoy this on some levels. The concept was original and there was some cool artwork but it just wasn't my style.

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Score: 4

"not that great"

by: JKMonkey

date: July 9, 2009

Really wasn't a big fan of this one man, for a few reasons. One being that the artwork picked for the collab kind of sucked, even though I shouldnt be throwing stones because my art skills are crap, but no pieces of art here were even decent, nothing grabbed my attention, next time you arrange an art collab, try and arrange some well put together and well-thought-out pieces of art to give the viewer something nice to see.

The audio was good, very relaxing and pleasant to listen to, really added some nice ambiance to the flash, good job with that.

Another thing I didnt like about it was that sometimes the text bubbles were hard to read, next time make them bigger and the text less sloppy so it's legible.

Better luck next time man, 2/5 from me.

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