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This was my second flash ever. Drawn frame-by-frame with a tablet, doesn't have a preloader (so small) and loops.
Also, the rock changes size, lazy animator...
A little boring...
It's silent. You really want to put some sound effects in to make it more interesting. It's also not very dramatic or realistic. Try adding a background. If you want to keep the frame-by-frame style, you don't have to redraw the background again and again. Just make it a symbol with two different but similar frames. But you probably already knew that. Anyways, next time make the movements more dramatic. Have the guy get bowled over by the rock, rather than leaning to the side after he's hit. Maybe add some blood?
I don't know. keep up the good work.
Hey, thanks for such a long and remedial review! People like you keep people like me happy & working.
Not bad for your second animation. I like it. 6/10, 3/5.
You made such an long movie watching it for 20+ mins now and its still not ending. And its just 68.1kb how dit you do that?
Would make an okay gif
#This would make an okay gif you made the transition between the rock throws quicker it just doesnt look right!
Yup, it's the starting pause.
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