kool
at least this is better then my first flash. good job
Well, it seems my interests expanded alittle. While watching animations and flashes on Newgrounds really made me want to make this, sorry it's not best material, but just started recently and now I made my first animation.
kool
at least this is better then my first flash. good job
Great.
Not bad. This is really good for a start. And I can see you having potential. But, yes a loader will most defin. be nice. And the music is wicked but needs to stop at the end. good work, keep going.
Everyone has their beginning
Hehe, this would probably be my first flash submission if I ever got flash, or something like it.
I honestly like the way you did it. Sure, its not as pretty or script intensive, but its definitely a good start. Its got some originality to it too, with the way the stick figures acted and how the action was portrayed.
However, as some of the other people have said, a preloader would be nice, and shortening the music would help a ton. Distinguishment would also be helpful.
Not too bad though. I can see you going places. :D
Keep at it...
everyone has to start somewhere. and here you start. keep building from it.
if i may recommend a couple of things.
work on graphics and transitions... smooth them out (of course)
also use a loader. adding the newgrounds loader is simple and easy and it will make you project look abit more professional at the end of the day.
GL on future projects!
hyep
Turned out pretty well. You might want to consider getting a preloader for your future flashes, and a replay button. Also, while the music keeps going on at the end, that will just make the file size more bigger. And, try to distinguish one stick from the other.