Score: 6

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by: grossguy1211

date: June 23, 2009

Freaking enviromental bullshit. At least, that's how I interpret it. Decent animating, annoying music. Nothing else. I'm being REALLY generous.

Score: 10

"Kinda trippie"

by: GhostAuone

date: June 22, 2009

That was kinda trippy. What is the owl and city represent?

Score: 10

"Cool."

by: Klemzo

date: June 22, 2009

No matter what other !)%?!%& say, I think its great :)

Score: 7

"my opinion"

by: TheMunkey

date: June 22, 2009

Storywise, its a bit unclear what's going on, like why is the owl flying through the buildings, or why, however your goal was to represent places and spaces, right?

My suggestion would be to add more identifiable landmarks and make them more detailed in order to raise their visual importance. Otherwise they would just get lost along with the other mostly blank buildings.

As for the owl, my guess is that you wanted a realistic flight cycle, instead of a stylized one. It might be a good idea to research a little more about it. Its not so hard, just google it.

Music, well, i think electronic music has been overused to dead, it just doesn't have the impact it used to have. Im not saying get rid of it, but consider the other possibilities, along with the not so obvious ones. Other genres maybe.

Score: 7

"Wings of the owl"

by: erikkol

date: June 22, 2009

When the camera's behind the owl, the wings are click able... button maybe? , anyways good idea, just could use a lil more detail to the city. Overall Pretty good