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Terrible voice acting. Just a bad flash.
It would have been nice.
It would have been good but you need to work on your voice acting or whoever did it. It needs to sound real and not muffled or else it is really hard to get a laugh out of people. I'm not saying it is bad though, it just would be better if you well...made it flow better and got better voicing. You'll get better. 2/5 for this one sorry...
the voice acting sucked but it was proabally your first flah need a lot of improvement
Needs a lot of work
First of all, your animation is not consistent through out the whole movie. The animation in the beginning was decent but could use some work, but what really hurt this piece was the last part in which you changed your style to stick figures. If you put an equal amount of work through out you piece you will make a better movie.
The other thing that needs some work is the voice recording. I could hardly understand a word that was being said. Even when I turned the volume up it was only gibberish. I would also try line the voice up with the mouth movement.
It's a start...
It was quite basic. Audio wasn't too good - next time, try to get some more people to help you with it, or at least make the voice work sound a little more "authentic" in the context of the movie. The premise was paper thin though, mainly because everyone could see the ending coming a mile away. Despite that, I can tell it was an honest attempt at something, unlike some flash submissions I've seen. Keep at it and I'm sure you'll make something really good as time moves on. It's all part of the learning process. :)
It's da pizzaboi.
I keep on having this reoccurring dream, where Tobey Maguire watches me eat cream.
Good things do happen.
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