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Jun 18, 2009 | 5:19 PM EDT

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This is my second line ultimatum, and it was really fun to make. I took a lot of the comments I received from the first one, and attempted to implement them as best I could in this one. That includes trying to help it make sense, though it ended up not making much sense at all. Well, one can try!

I hope you like it, and if you could please recommend this for the experimental section, that would be great! THANK YOU!

Reviews


ErichoEricho

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars June 18, 2009

Alright

I was expecting some joke flash like maybe just a single frame or two of something happening, but I'm glad to say it was at least better than I thought it would be. While obviously it didn't take that long to make, at least everything moved pretty fluidly.


Ajgajg responds:

I'm glad I surprised you. I hope you took the time to watch my other one, and I hope you'll see the next one, once it is finished. Thanks for taking the time to write a review.


DaylDayl

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars June 18, 2009

not terrible, i guess...

...but definitely not as good as your first one.
i thought i remembered your first one so i went and watched it and it`s a lot better than this one. LONGER, for one thing.

i liked some parts, like the first fast spiraling, when the music swelled. and the climbing black square-ish things on the right. you have talent, for sure...you just need to practice frame by frame more, and spend more time on your next one, so it`s longer.


Ajgajg responds:

Thanks for the great advice, the first one was longer, next time I'll make sure it's longer. Hopefully you like my next one more! Thanks for the comment!


MrWalrusMrWalrus

Rated 2 / 5 stars June 18, 2009

This makes sense?

It's a nifty idea, really, but it made no sense. Whatsoever. I mean.. The shapes you made were new, but they didn't require any sort of animation skill or time. Everything probably took like a few seconds to make. The music and the joke at the end were great, but without them it would've failed.


Ajgajg responds:

Ya, I think maybe I didn't really want it to make sense, and have a short of rushed view, because this is supposed to show life, and life is frantic, doesn't always make sense, and is brutally short. Thanks for the comments!


AtropusAtropus

Rated 2 / 5 stars June 18, 2009

It's ok

It's interesting and exciting, i dont know what besides that it is. whatever it may be, a little polishing, and an increased length and it will be an excellent... thing.


Ajgajg responds:

I noticed this one was a little short, thanks for the tips.