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Heh, I can't say that I really didn't see something like that happening at the end. It was a bit predictable, but still enjoyable nonetheless. I enjoyed the voice acting, I think you did a good job with that. One thing I would improve would be to add some more drawing detail into this. Backgrounds and such other than just the plain white one.

Score: 4

"Needs some work."

by: Fro

date: June 15, 2009

~ Animation/Graphics ~

This is where the submission is lacking. I would first work on character development. The characters looked very rushed and just didn't look that good. I'd then focus on adding backgrounds and more colors. Something like a old dingy bar with some lights in the background, but for the most part pretty dark.
Improving those things would greatly improve your submission.

~ Story/Content ~

This wasn't too bad. I liked the idea and it was kind of funny. It wouldn't make a bad series either if you could think of enough social situations and not run out of original ideas for humor. Something like this could be successful, but could also get boring after awhile.

~ Audio ~

I didn't like the voice quality too much. Very poor quality and for me too quiet in the beginning and a tad too loud at the end. I understand it was suppose to be a scream, but you might have over powered it a little bit.

~ Overall ~

Voice and artwork/animations need to be improved on, but not too bad overall. Preloader and replay button would also be nice.

Score: 7