Score: 4
"You've done alright with this..."
date: June 15, 2009
It was a good effort, I must admit. The animation was alright, a bit rough on the edges. Like the cloud just disappearing, and the end jingle. I assume you ran out of time to finish it or something. The rest of it was rather good, just need to clean up your drawings a little bit.
But then we come onto the sound quality for your voices. I thought that ruined it quite a bit. I'm assuming the microphone was rather shabby. I think that subtitling of speech-bubbling the lines may have worked a little better.
A few improvements could have been done to make it better, but not a bad effort.
June 15, 2009
Author's Response:
You're right about the time issue, I was pressed for time during the end which is why the cloud just dissapears etc.. However the sound was recorded on a good microphone, Flash just lessens the quality, probably because I dont know how to optimize it.
Thank you for the review, it's helpful to know that you can tell from the animation that parts are rushed, If I have time I will come back to this and polish it up.
Thanks again!
