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I think its hard to explain, and it would make more sense if it wasnt
The gravitaxis effect and the 'live & color' icarus drug
Ok, so it was about drugs....
It started out as a bust for making some type of drug, (which one of my friends died of overdose)
And basically somehow he propelled himself all the way into space and fall again and was going to die....right?
Yeah, well great job on promoting and stereotyping people that listen to techno does drugs......
Here's what could of been better about it, this is where teh CONSTRUCTIVE CRITISISM STARTS:
Perhaps make the flash go with the music, it seems to be more about you made a flash, and stuck a techno song with it, the only part that really matched as when he was rewinded back into space.
Make it move: when I say that, less slo mo rewind
Shadow and lights: When the fireworks were exploding, I didn't see any of the colors of the fireworks reflect or rather shadow off of the guy with the blue eye.
A more better morale story: And when I say this, make it to where it doesn't involve anything bad, i.e. drugs. Most people on here are impressionable because they're young, and when I said my friend died, she was 17 and that's what everyone was doing at that rave, though it was X, and everyone was doing it so they pressured her into it, don't want to relate to anyone about that ever...
I like where and what you were trying to do, but just fix a few things.
like the animation and design weird concept though
I don't know about this one
It was...well average. I mean I didn't really feel anything for this one, your other submissions are so much more energetic and fun to watch, but this one just felt like it dragged on and the music didn't help either, and the story it was meh guy falling (in reverse), hell even he looked bored through out the flash which is weird considering he's about to get his brains painted all over the pavement or not I don't know.
Made no sense.
I watched a stiff guy falling backwards and forwards and all sorts of weird shit that made no sense. Animation was decent for a flash cartoon, but wasn't very good. The faces look like distorted mutated knives. They could stab someone with what I assume is their "nose" (Anime noses=rofl). Somewhat decent attempt at a time-wasting nonsensical thing though.
6 out of ten.
Was hoping for a reverse easter egg.
Too slow for me sorry.
Health Reminder 3: The Unfixable Thought Machine
This is oil story... The real trend of the world. How Tuk uses oil to solve his problems?
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