By The Moonlight by Marsume



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Submitted: 06/14/2009 | 07:02PM EST

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Genre: Action

Current Score: 3.64 / 5.00

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!!!!*****~~~~READ THIS FIRST~~~~*****!!!!

****BACKSTORY FOR EVERYONE WHO WANTED A STORY!****
In the forbidden forest of Nasties there lies a jewel most sacred. The Moonlight Stone. A stone that can blanket in world in darkness. Illuminating only with the moon.

At the age of 9, two selfish brothers were told a legend about this sacred stone, whist their father was dying. His last words were: "The Moonlight. Its so peaceful, so beautiful. I wish I could see such a serene sight one more time. I wish I could die by the moonlight." After their fathers death the brothers left each other in silence, leaving for different parts of the land. Both to be trained for the same cause. To get the Moonlight Stone, and to make it forever dark. For their father.

10 Years later. On the day of their fathers death, they both arrived at the Forbidden Forest. Not seeing each other for a decade, they had forgotten each other, and in their eyes, only seeing the other as a obstacle between them and the Moonlight Stone. Only seeing each other as an enemy...nothing more.

The Moonlight is no longer the serene place their father once said it was. Now The Moonlight is only the spotlight on this dark battlefield.

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:D

This was a remake of my first attempt at creating a flash.

I had this idea 3 years ago, and tried to create it. Sadly, it was a bad (hugely anime induced) piece of crap. I didn't know exactly how to use flash at all back then, so I eventually gave up.

Back in March, I had to start making a "Final Project" for my grade 11 Animation class. I thought about what to do, and I thought It would be fun to "remake" my old animation just to see how far I've come. :)

I completely rewrote the story (thats a lie, I never wrote a story for it way back when :P) and 3 months later...Tada. :D

Also, this was a huge learning experience for me, as before I started this, I couldn't animate characters AT ALL. :)

So enjoy, Comments and critiques greatly appreciated.

-Dylan Meville

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Average Score: 8.2 / 10

Score: 9
Random-B360

"Epicness"

date: September 20, 2009

I thought it had good animation and the background and characters were very origanail ... well the characters it seemed you just made a sasuke with diffrent well the clothes wernt that diffrent either but i dont really care it was a good flash

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Score: 10
ZStriefel

"whoa"

date: September 18, 2009

hella sick dude! The environment is freakin awesome! everything looks great! wish there was more though!

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Score: 10
Molotov

"Amazing"

date: June 22, 2009

This was a great flash,the animation was fantastic especially the background and the character design was good & dark,the one disappointment was that this was very short but other than that his was a great first attempt at a flash animation so keep up the great work and submit some more in the future. =)

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Score: 8
KidDeath

"Decent animation"

date: June 15, 2009

I'm not really gonna review it, I just wanna say that it sucks you took 5th under that TERRIBLE flash that took 4th. Seriously, you should have gotten higher that day. But yeah, blah blah make it longer blah blah story blah blah blah

June 15, 2009

Author's Response:

Yeah. I went to take a look at 4th after you said that and I'm disappointed. He did use more tweens then me though ;) That must count for something. LOL

Anyways. Yeah. Story. Longer. got it ;)

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Score: 6
arceus121

"ehh"

date: June 15, 2009

needs story, and make it much longer, great art and an o.k fighting seen. you can do better.

June 15, 2009

Author's Response:

O:

I think I can too!

Though the fight scene did take me about 9 hours to do. (Straight I may add, It took so much longer then It should have. BUT IT WAS FUN :D)

Thanks :)

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