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Thanks for 'Daily 2nd Place'! WOW!
Cute and well animated you did a super job!
Thanks Tyco! =))
You have talent
This is one of those rare times where I really can't think of any criticism. The story is great and original, the characters are awesome, great use of color, and the music was spot on. Defititely one of the best flashes I have seen in a while. Keep up the great work, hope to see more.
Thanks much -
I'm probably one of my own worse critics, so I appreciate your opinion. From my stand-point, I could have made the animation much more efficiently (Took longer than needed to make). Character animation is not what I do on a daily basis (unfortunately), so I'm always catching on to better techniques/short-cuts.
Haha, this flash was cute. And pretty awesome. The art work on it was great. The story line was simple and easy to follow. And it had an awesome ending.
Some have said that it's a little fast paced and a bit hard to follow, so I'm glad to hear that you had no problem ascertaining the events of the plot. To be honest, I can see both sides of the discussion, it is pretty quick in some areas, but if you stare at it intently enough, it usually works out.
Next time I'll animate a slower tune. =))
hahaaa sure beats the usual garbage
Usually Newgrounds is too nice to people who upload their garbage here and give them the pleasure of FRONT PAGE. The ones I took notice of the most is the Gunchest series and There She IS and SUPAH NINTENDOH 2 and this cartoon. Well done to make it into professionalism mate. Your stuff is pure quality,
Thanks for the positive feedback!
I'm with you on the flood of low-end stuff that gets front page. I don't really care if I make front page, I just want to constantly improve if you know what I mean. Too bad I have a stupid day job, otherwise I could do a lot more of this kinda stuff.
Frequently I shoot myself in the foot with overly complex animation, so hopefully the next few will be a little more on the simple side, while still maintaining the craziness.
Technically I don't see anything to improve at all.
Story wise, it was decently funny, although it felt like it flowed too fast for my personal tastes, with joke scene after joke scene after joke scene with only a few transitions, but that's my own personal preference. 5/5 9/10
Detective Nwar troubleshoots a hyper-intelligent evil AI.
A magical, musical adventure for the whole family!
More Speedrunnin' & Easter Egg Huntin' ...In Hoenn.
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