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Thanks for 'Daily 2nd Place'! WOW!
Cute and well animated you did a super job!
Thanks Tyco! =))
You have talent
This is one of those rare times where I really can't think of any criticism. The story is great and original, the characters are awesome, great use of color, and the music was spot on. Defititely one of the best flashes I have seen in a while. Keep up the great work, hope to see more.
Thanks much -
I'm probably one of my own worse critics, so I appreciate your opinion. From my stand-point, I could have made the animation much more efficiently (Took longer than needed to make). Character animation is not what I do on a daily basis (unfortunately), so I'm always catching on to better techniques/short-cuts.
Haha, this flash was cute. And pretty awesome. The art work on it was great. The story line was simple and easy to follow. And it had an awesome ending.
Some have said that it's a little fast paced and a bit hard to follow, so I'm glad to hear that you had no problem ascertaining the events of the plot. To be honest, I can see both sides of the discussion, it is pretty quick in some areas, but if you stare at it intently enough, it usually works out.
Next time I'll animate a slower tune. =))
hahaaa sure beats the usual garbage
Usually Newgrounds is too nice to people who upload their garbage here and give them the pleasure of FRONT PAGE. The ones I took notice of the most is the Gunchest series and There She IS and SUPAH NINTENDOH 2 and this cartoon. Well done to make it into professionalism mate. Your stuff is pure quality,
Thanks for the positive feedback!
I'm with you on the flood of low-end stuff that gets front page. I don't really care if I make front page, I just want to constantly improve if you know what I mean. Too bad I have a stupid day job, otherwise I could do a lot more of this kinda stuff.
Frequently I shoot myself in the foot with overly complex animation, so hopefully the next few will be a little more on the simple side, while still maintaining the craziness.
GOOD: I liked the characters, especially the bat. The graphics are well drawn and clean. The music fits in well with the story and action. The animation was smoother than a baby's bottom and it was a cute submission. I also got a kick out of the ending. I also liked the pause feature. Not many flashes have that option.
BAD: Lack of sounds for some of the gunshots.
IMPROVE: I'd say add in some gunfire sounds when the bull was shooting.
OVERALL: It was a cute animation that was professionally done with only a few missing sound effects. Well animated and the characters had their charms with a nice ending that makes me hungry for more. Excellent job.
Hi, thanks for taking the time to review and comment!
Additionally, you can flip through the scenes by using the arrow keys. I didn't advertise this feature because I wasn't sure it would work, but it sure does =))
I'd like to explain the bull/gun shot situation. I timed certain gunshots to synch with the drums in the music. This is because originally I wasn't going to have *any* sound-effects. I thought this approach was pretty cool, so even when I added the sfx, I didn't add them where the drums coincided with shots. Hope this makes sense. Regardless, I'm glad that you liked it overall.
Detective Nwar gets his hands dirty for a political campaign.
My virgin dad 2!
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