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NOTE: THIS IS ONLY ABOUT 15 SECONDS LONG. PLEASE REVIEW ACCORDINGLY.
EDIT: I've fixed the hand-through-torso bug.
A character animation test!
Please leave constructive criticism, thanks!
I made this primarily to test:
-Character movement (all movie-clip symbol-based)
-Walk-cycle (NOT FUN AT ALL)
I watched this about 5 times before realizing it was a loop LoL...
Ok the hand is fixed.
All is great but one more thing:
why the nose moves with eyes when he looks on the blue thing? It's looks wierd! On the beginning he moves only eyes.
True. Perhaps i'll make it so only the mouth and eyes move. I'm so indecisive!
Other than the looping (which I read in your despcription that the clip was only 15 secs long) it definitely has potential as something more. You need to work on the hand popping through his waist as he's walking, and he looks creepy without actual eyes. However, the lip-syncing is perfect and the movement (other than walking) looks great. Keep working on it and I think you'll do great.
Oiy! I totally missed that, thanks for the heads up about the hand thing!
I'll see what I can do on the other stuff as well.
Since you seem to want feedback
Assuming that you're trying to approximate reality as closely as possible, you need to move the left arm to a lower layer so that his left hand doesn't pop out between the bottom hem of his shirt and the top of this pants when he walks toward the can.
Yeah, I had totally missed that. Thanks!
Fairly well animated, would like to see this implemented in a full length animation.
However I don't kno if you should post animation 'tests' on newgrounds.
Anyway, fairly good job, keep up the good work.
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