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Four More Things I HATE

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Jun 13, 2009 | 2:46 AM EDT

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This took some time. In fact, this is the first flash project I ever completed that I actually spent more than 18+ hours on. In fact, I spent like 3 of those hours trying to figure out why Flash kept on crashing when I played this movie. But I fixed that, and it works. Yippee.

Never mind my opinion, just go and watch it. And have fun. And to set that "fun" and "mellow" mood, I put a song on the screen after the movie loads where you can listen to a great song by Boston before you play the movie (if you want).

Oh yeah, my animation progressively gets better. Better lip-sync and shizz. No more bouncing mouths.

IMPORTANT NOTE: I got a new mic, but that was after I recorded everything. So everything voice I made will be sort of low. If you don't mind, you could adjust your speaker volume so you can hear. Thank you! (That part's not my fault)..

Enjoy!

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Aleut2Aleut2

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Not bad

I actually enjoyed this. I completely agree, I hate people who become such a douche in online games just because its the only way they have to feel badass. Oh well.

Th drawing was nice, and the animation was ok. The audio was a little annoying though, but I have to say I loved the "Don't Fear the Reaper" clip thrown in there. One of my fav songs. I still have to agree with TheThirdSix though, you should have it play quietly in the background throughout the entire flash, instead of using the intro four times.

All in all, an 8. It was an enjoyable movie that gave me a small chuckle, but a few minor flaws prevented it from a 10. Still, good job, and I hope to see more from you!

Oh, and if you actually took the time to read this boring review, kudos to you!


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PotatoefpPotatoefp

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

MEH

Lipsyncing is good. You should really either concentrate on making things look pretty or making the animation smoother. Also better voice-acting wouldn't hurt.



TheThirdSixTheThirdSix

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Meh...

There was some noticeable effort, but not much. This could've been much better. You have a lot of potential in flash, but here are some tips:

Try mastering your audio! Download Audacity and you can REALLY improve your voice acting, even if you have a sub-par microphone.

Clean up your art! You could really make your flashes so much better if you just put a little more time into your drawings. It's obvious you know how to animate pretty decently. Now, all you need is some less sloppy characters and backgrounds.

Add some music variety! I heard the intro to "Don't Fear the Reaper" like four times in that one flash. Either let the song play throughout the whole movie--getting softer during speaking and louder during intervals--or just use different songs! Like I said, download some audio-editing software so you can cut up the tracks to lower the file size.

Over all, I give you a three for okay work.


evibini responds:

Thank you for the in-depth review. Yes, I am good at drawing, but not animating. Every flash I try to put my FULLEST effort into seem to get me to where I get artists block and no longer continue. I'm also trying to keep my mind one-tasked. The problem with audio is the fact that I'm using my mothers computer and she doesn't want me downloading everything I come across, so I'll see into the Audacity. Thanks again!


3GreyLeaves3GreyLeaves

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

I still don't understand one thing

Why did you put a picture of Obama in the burger king seen?


evibini responds:

Do you not know the difference in Obama and Will Smith?


FriedNukemFriedNukem

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

I agree

I really do hate people who taunt you in an online game. I really hate it if they're hacking and think they're leet because they can cheat.


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