Much better than I can do =P
I'm not bilingual and I understood just fine, and I understand it's just a test so I'm not going to get upset or anything.
But basically the only real problem was the shuriken, which had a field apx. 1.3x larger than its actual mass, and occasionally the fish would glitch behind one of the shapeshifting bubbles. If you were to add intertia and spice up the graphics, this would be just like many other popular games out there! Good luck in your learning, hope to see some stuff soon!