Score: 5

"Could be improved"

by: Ismael92

date: June 12, 2009

You see, the animation is good, as well as the voice acting, but I feel like the flash is too random.

You certainly showed potential, I think you could animate something good if you wanted too, but you need a good storyline (as this one was a bit weak). I'm saying this because it was too random (the fire popped out of nowhere, and the end doesn't make any sense).

As I said, the animation was good. The voice acting was good too and the syncing was well done, though the music should have started before.

Overall it's not bad at all, and you have potential, I think you could make something great in the future :)

Score: 7

"loves it!!"

by: mco180

date: June 11, 2009

next time, extend those 3 hours to make the effect worse, like showing some of the activities in the 3 hours. trust me, it will be a lot funnier through simple changes.

loved ur flash

Score: 1

"I still have my waffles"

by: FG39

date: June 11, 2009

Well, I agree with you saying it will get blammed. Maybe you could make mini-toons like that in a "series" type of thing, but this just didn't make a statement.

Score: 2

"WTF"

by: 7andwin

date: June 11, 2009

Is not always the best thing, found this one actually pretty boring...

Score: 3

"owned"

by: Kde777

date: June 11, 2009

it's very similar to a simpsons episode, i don't think it's a "joke" to make it in a individual flash, you know what i mean? it's most for a random scene in a large movie or something.
and it's important to KNOW HOW to make this kind of jokes or random things.
the "doesn't make sense" thing I find it really like a invented reason to make people.. vote higher?

you know you can do it better