Score: 0
"meh"
date: November 28, 2007
what's up with those weird colors for the textboxes? just use simple white boxes with black text in it. no need to color them in about 3 million different colors.
anyway, to the flash: the graphics were just bad, even back then. put more effort into creating your characters, so that they don't look like a circle and a rectangle mixed together.
you also have to work on your animations. this looked more of a picture slideshow than like fluent anymations. add more frames and try to create fluent movements.
the story was also lame, but this is just a matter of taste, i guess. but try to be more original.