sweet dude
YAY! question mark at the end. sequel sequel sequel! *fart* "it was u!!"
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Sonic continues his quest for vengeance against his mechanical counterpart, Mecha Sonic, for killing his best friend Tails. Will Sonic be able to finish off his evil self, or will he be destroyed by his evil thoughts? Only one way to find out!
Good effort!
Reasonably well done, but sadly flawed. You but a reasonable amount of effort into this series, though it lacks a certain 'oomph'. The story is mostly concealed, and is filled with loose ends. Why didn't Mecha go all out from the start? Where'd all this 'darkness' come from? I liked the techni-talk Mecha was spouting most of the time, although Sonic's tendency to stop moving as Mecha talked seems a major, anime-esque flaw. "I'm not going to give you that chance!" in number one impressed me, but you kinda let it slip after that.
Nice animation, moderately inventive battle, and an overall well-polished look. Yet the flaws are very obvious and ruin the feeling a bit. There's no suspense, and the mecha having 'failure' running over the screen whilst misspelled just gave a kiddy impression.
All in all, there's animation talent in there, but the story and setup could use some improvement.
Don't give up, and MaikMoar(tm)!
~Glun
gamefreak20000 responds:
Huh...I did not notice I misspelled failure...oops.
Anyway, thanks for watching!
new assessment:this is epic
it was epic lol i say epic for everything
Eeeeeeeehhhhh
it was alright, the comedy and reference from SFC was good but I think for the end of a revenge flash it could have had a way deeper ending and some better music that was mysterious to compliment the whole "Fin...?" thing or some darker music because as I said before, it's a revenge flash
This One Was Awsome
The Title Says It All