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Aug 23, 2000 | 11:49 AM EDT
  • Daily Feature August 24, 2000

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And Justice For All ... Dogs

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CelebrationCelebration

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Nice!

Good ending where the dog keep walking with the mans arm! Just perfect!


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Manderz25Manderz25

Rated 5 / 5 stars

interesting

I thought in the begining it was going to stay all flat like. then i saw the bird shit...then the dog lol, the best was the smoke from the cig. it was a nice touch.

I would have thought when they crossed the road they would have been hit, but totaly fooled me lol.
Nice one.


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DoomKillYouDoomKillYou

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Jó csak kár hogy igaz történet

Good



alucardxmeowalucardxmeow

Rated 2 / 5 stars

Intesting...

But a bit boring, in the beginning there is nothing but a dog and man walking, that will give a sign to users that it is boring and they will close it and give a bad reveiw. So in your future flash's, I recommend you put something interesting in the beginning so keep users focused on the project.

It was good, but just the way you set it up made it boring. Also, it's unsual a car would drive on the sidewalk and run someone over. Please improve your skills on the story, think about it, check for obvious errors before submitting, and you should be ready to go.

4/10 for effort



ceenceen

Rated 0 / 5 stars

boring!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

is that a ture story????