IMPORTANT
Watch number 1 here so you understand the story line and the jokes. It just won't make sense if you don't. You've been warned lol.
http://www.newgrounds.com /portal/view/490326 (minus any spaces newgrounds creates in links)
This is the 2nd installment of my Generic Flash Series. In each episode I try to make reference to different games/sprites. This one was a tad bit shorter than the first one, but that was because people told me the walking was too slow in the first one.
- Improvements
Faster walking
More sound effects
Faster text
More plot/jokes
- What still needs to be improved (in the next episode)
I'm just going to stop talking with the text and start using voices
More detailed
A reviewer requested that I use a subtitle bar instead so I did, but I wished that I would have made the subtitle bar transparent. That will be kept in mind if I end up not making the voices for the next episode.
Anyway, watch, review, vote, etc.. I don't care what score you give me on a review as long as the review is helpful. Telling me not only what to improve, but also how if at all possible.
Also, my 2nd flash that I've ever made. I'm just a writer on the other 23 or so. :P
Thanks to sonofkirk for the quick icon.
