Score: 8
"A good start"
date: June 19, 2009
This little flash is cute and shows some skill, I give you some hints because I think you have potential:
- drawings: you have your own style and it's nice, but you have to develop it a little further. Hands are "loaf like" and force you to add hints like "shaking". Try harder, I think you can do better than that. 6/10
- animation: simple but well done, the unconscious frame adds something funny to it. 9/10
- music/sounds: the music it's just perfect and fits the flash, on the other way there are no sounds and again you added hints for that. 7/10 as an average.
- plot/idea: a funny little story full of ideas, the yar sign instead od sos is wonderful, the pirate Pete makes me laugh, just a question: the treasure they trade is real or it's a pirate's trick? 10/10
Overall 8/10, I will wait for your next flash matey, marooned or not.
June 19, 2009
Author's Response:
Thanks for all of your kind words and critiques! I love a little constructive criticism :D
Yeah I know my art needs a bit of improvement. I'm trying to work on it. My hands always suck though..I call them muffinhands. I kinda like them XD
Heh. As for the treasure, you'll have to stick around to find out ;D
Y'ARR
