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This is my first flash animation, based on one of my comics
I hope you like it, as it took several days to animate
But, still, keep honest reviews
Oh, there's an easter egg in it, try and find it :D
What a simple time we live in!
The Phisermans review. So blunt, and doesnt really offer anything helpful. Chris, I dont think i'm in any case able to criticse your comics, so I dont think someone can moan about your flashs content, especially as it's your first flash animation, which is always impressive. (You can get some horribly rank voice animations, or stickmen or something other than turd.) I'd offer, like deathwiller said some great elevator music, perhaps a collab rather than a short and even a reply, or rewind section like some flashes. Always helpful that.
Personally chris, I hope to see you on the frontpage sometime, good luck with the animation man. Next egoraptor you grizzly BEAST. Take it easy lemon squeezy.
Why, thank you, elevator music is actually what i was looking for, by the way, any way to rewind animations? the way i do them is with LOTS of symbols within symbols, so i don't know how to stop everything with one function or command. Anyway, thanks for the honest review, I'm finding most everyone so far to be helpful in some way.
Funny, good voices, and great animation for your first try. Nice job!
My spidey sense is tingling....
I smell potential.... Dont get sad if this one kind of fails, because it was short, and felt a little bit empty. I liked the style and concept of the presentation.
I think you should keep making these cartoons, however.... Read my advice:
*Find fitting background music for the entire animation ( I think instrumental, neat music would do)
*Dont make single shorts, If you like making shorts, Make a lot of them and compile them in a movie.
*A little lowder, and if the background stays the same (for all your movies) color it ( I mean the TV) and add details.
Overall: It was nice, cute, but this was too short. Put more effort.
Good luck~! Dont give up!
thanks for the support, and advice, im not too keen on making cartoons with colors, and ya, i do think it needs some elevator music and to be louder. thanks again!
Best flash ever .
LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOL. XD omg this rox hella hard hehe. :D
Short,Sweet, and to the Point
Decent voice work and epicly drawn sandwich haha. Loved that it was short and still funny. Keep it up mane
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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