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Jun 8, 2009 | 7:50 PM EDT

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This really has nothing to do with that guy's revenge lol as you will soon see.

It more so introduces Shanx's umm..."co-workers" as you will soon see in the animation his occupation is an assassin. He has one brother Cross Bones and the other two are brothers as well.

[EDIT]
For the record peeps this is random practice stuff, i just need votes on the actual animation, rather than the content of it or wat it reminds you of.

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t-bone88t-bone88

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars June 9, 2009

Ok, so....

It was a good intro, that's how you got the 4, and you distinguished the enemies by symbols rather then just making them different colors, thats how you got the other 3, but to get a 10, you need length (that's what she said LOL)

But anyway, I like where you're going with this, but it needs needs needs to be longer on your next submission, and you should be able to make front page if you play your cards right, it's all there, just gotta put it together now.

Look forward to the rest of this ^_^


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Leeon09 responds:

Thanks, ill definitely keep that in mind


Deathcon7Deathcon7

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars June 8, 2009

Imaginitive

Build it up. Work on character art and deepen each character's profiles, then you should have some really good interactions between them which would be great fuel for various animations. In short, the idea has potential, and the animation is slick enough to bring it to fruition in a very visually appealing way. Good luck.



FedeNarutoFedeNaruto

Rated 4 / 5 stars June 8, 2009

Nice work

Although it is short like me much, and sounds of Dragon ball were good;)