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My first flash animation - with sound!
Please watch and enjoy, any feedback is greatly appreciated!
Great for a first submission. Although I think that on some of the more action scenes you should zoom in a bit.
Yeah thats a good idea - thanks!
Yeah this is a pretty good first submission but like another person siad it still needs work and you have some different ideas i especially liked when he got the bike and it turned orange! great job
He is ORANGE the Ninja! XD
I don't much like stick movies, but this one was pretty good! This could really be something if more time was spent animating with some kind of plot and voices. The best thing was...ninjas are awesome! This is kinda like ninjas in the matrix, so it's super cool!
Not bad for your first flash animation.
Keep practicing, you've got a lot of potential.
For a first flash, not bad at all.
Firstly, congrats on your first submission. As far as the flash goes, I found it to be basic, yet enjoyable. Even with just stick figures, I was caught by how you animated the building action sequences. Keep improving your skills at animating, and I imagine you will do very well indeed.
Thanks for the review!
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