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Jun 3, 2009 | 5:08 PM EDT

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Well, I'm not gonna lie, I am not exactly PROUD of this, yet still, it's the first (non vomitive) movie I have ever completed. Did this in around 9 days, so please try to watch this with your expectations... not really all to high, because you'll be dissapointed, yet still, I did my best to see this turn out good, and I really wanted to make a submission to the wonderful page that is Newgrounds. Thanks a HELL LOT to you for watching, I really apretiatte it, I read and respond all reviews, so if you can make me a favor and tell me ANYTHING I could improve on, just tell me, I'd be really thankful. Now, the movie is short, I would've loved to make it longer, but I ended up having to cut the music in half and just finish it here, I just had to finish this quickly so that I can get rolled with my Power of Three team!

Aaaaaaaand... here's some dull stadistics:

- 1644 frames
- NO tweens at all.
- 24 Frames per second
- A minute and eight seconds long
- Music by blackattackbitch (http://blackattackbitch.
- A lot of love.
- Love for you too.

Thanks, enjoy!




Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Very nice...

I voted high...You really should give yourself more credit than you do.

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Zyphonee responds:

Well, I try to give myself as less "credit" as I can, helps me improving I guess, this way, I can look at my own mistakes from a cynical point of view, thanks for voting it high, man!


Rated 5 / 5 stars

What the shiz duuude?!

I havent been on Newgrounds on AGES, and as soon as I come to the portal for a LONG time, I am greeted with this fucking awesome flash. Awesome animation and has a lot of esscence, sory, I just feel like its the only work to descibe it. else than... beautiful. totally beautifull.

10/10, 5/5!

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Zyphonee responds:

YOU are beautiful.


Rated 3 / 5 stars

A step in a good direction

It seemed you were going for a somewhat artistic approach, and though my eyes didn't explode out of my head in amazement, I do think you have something going for you. I couldn't really figure out any sort of poetry or story you were going for if at all. Or was this just an artsy compilation of a few doodles or yours?

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Zyphonee responds:

Doodles, the whole artistic approach is just an experimentation, hehehe


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars


although it was really short, I liked it. I appreciated that looseleaf bg along with the pencil art because it gave fullness to the overall piece. The music, i think, went along with the animation pretty well. Overall, I enjoyed it.

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Zyphonee responds:

Although it was a short review, it was useful, I appretiate how you pointed out aspects you liked. The shortness of the review gave me more time to keep working. Overall, thank you.


Rated 3 / 5 stars


But if your not really coloring your drawings you might want to get a little less dark background, maybe put it on 50% opacity or just remove it or something. Other then that it's not that bad

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Zyphonee responds:

Thank you, but yeah, opacity was set on 64%, I wish I would've had more time for working on it, I would've really used a self-made background and colored the whole movie, detailing more into the characters, but I was really rushed, you see, I'm in South America, and in eigth grade, so that means that I'm a thirteen year old kido in the middle of his exams, so I didn't have much time to finish this. Thanks for the review man, I aprettiate your help!