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Jun 3, 2009 | 5:08 PM EDT

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Well, I'm not gonna lie, I am not exactly PROUD of this, yet still, it's the first (non vomitive) movie I have ever completed. Did this in around 9 days, so please try to watch this with your expectations... not really all to high, because you'll be dissapointed, yet still, I did my best to see this turn out good, and I really wanted to make a submission to the wonderful page that is Newgrounds. Thanks a HELL LOT to you for watching, I really apretiatte it, I read and respond all reviews, so if you can make me a favor and tell me ANYTHING I could improve on, just tell me, I'd be really thankful. Now, the movie is short, I would've loved to make it longer, but I ended up having to cut the music in half and just finish it here, I just had to finish this quickly so that I can get rolled with my Power of Three team!

Aaaaaaaand... here's some dull stadistics:

- 1644 frames
- NO tweens at all.
- 24 Frames per second
- A minute and eight seconds long
- Music by blackattackbitch (http://blackattackbitch.
- A lot of love.
- Love for you too.

Thanks, enjoy!




Rated 5 / 5 stars

I never got around to reviewing this

I thought it was really cool. The background gave it a sort of foreboding feeling which fit right in with the animation, which was incredibly detailed. Nice job!

Zyphonee responds:

Your icon looks like old Billy Mays


Rated 0 / 5 stars

What was that?

Well, that was just incredibly random and not in a good way like most Newgrounds funny flashes. It seems you draw decently but this flash as a whole was just awful. Your frame rate seems to be a bit too low because the animation isn't all that smooth. I see waaaay too much cheating (not putting the in-betweens). The background may be one that you can call interesting but it adds nothing to the animation. If you were going to waste a person's time at least do it with a better plot. Your body ratios are also a bit off and are actually quite bothersome to look at.

The only thing I can really complement you at was shading and the fact that this looks like it was done fbf (although that might be why the animation was a bit rough).

Zyphonee responds:

hehe, you're funny. I was aiming for something a bit more oriented to the animation, instead of "Teh d00r c4n C in2 ur SO000OUL" retarded humor that you call "most Newgrounds funny flashes."

Now I know that I am being extremely cynical, but I can't think of other way to respond, I simply dissagree with this review, although I may be wrong, but you're calling this a "waste of time", when you're saying that the animation was rough because it wasn't a disgusting tweenfest like the ones nowadays.

Of course, I am working on something a bit more aimed towards the "average Newgrounds user", but what you're asking me in this review is to leave the artist and creator perspective and be a complete and be a complete sellout, tweening everything around and doing the immature "R4ND0M 0H ZO FUNNYY!" Style of humor, and that, I cannot do.

Edit: However, I think I kinda owe you an explanation, I was not trying to make your review seem weaker, my intention isn't to make you look like an idiot, but still, I have to stick by my opinion that just because something isn't funny, it doesn't mean it can't be enjoyable, if you didn't enjoy it, you have left your opinion and it WILL be considered, I am not going to stop doing this type of flashes every now and then, but at least, thanks to your review, I know that there's some users who don't enjoy it as much as others, kinda like a market research, so every time I make a flash and upload it, I am one step closer to knowing what people like the most. Whatever. I apologize for being stubborn.


Rated 2 / 5 stars


More like an animation test than a form of entertainment. You seem to be more proud of the fact that you dont use animation tools then your actual submission and that in itself shows. because the quality of your animation, while fluid, isnt anything beyond that.

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Zyphonee responds:

It was just a test, I'm not exactly "proud" of the tools I used, I put passion into all of my flash, this one was done in 9 days or less, it's not bragging, but I can do WAY better ;)


Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

Could be better.

It could have improved much in the form of animation, this was good as a starter flash for an artist and you have a lot of potential. I'm seeing here a rushed kind of drawing and creation, but you mentioned beforehand that you did it in nine days, and I took that with a grain of salt. My suggestion, slow down on the animation, make it a little more smooth, and even though it might take longer, putting more time into the animation will do all that for you. I noticed in the faces and the like that there was some effort and specifics but not a lot. But I don't want to be much more of a downer, keep up the good work, and I hope to be able to see more of your flash.

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Zyphonee responds:

The problem here was that I really couldn't had taken longer because I am making a game. When FBFing, you have to draw every single frame over and over, so this drawing has 1644 frames of which 60% are FBF, if I were to make a single cycle longer, I'd have to make a space between each frame and make another frame, for which I didn't have time, when working on motion tweens, you just have to extend it, so this, as a test, was expected to be seen by users with a bit of understanding of flash and the animation techniques, of course, I know it's incredibly stupid to work like that, but this was more of a personal project than anything else, I myself am suprised with the score.


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Sorry for the very LATE review!

The animation was a little hacky and sometimes a little too fast. Lower your FPS. Also, that's just me, but I love colours, so you should add colours. Otherwise, a good start! Great music too!

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Zyphonee responds:

24fps is my lover, you ain't mess with it, biotch.