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Jun 3, 2009 | 5:08 PM EDT

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Well, I'm not gonna lie, I am not exactly PROUD of this, yet still, it's the first (non vomitive) movie I have ever completed. Did this in around 9 days, so please try to watch this with your expectations... not really all to high, because you'll be dissapointed, yet still, I did my best to see this turn out good, and I really wanted to make a submission to the wonderful page that is Newgrounds. Thanks a HELL LOT to you for watching, I really apretiatte it, I read and respond all reviews, so if you can make me a favor and tell me ANYTHING I could improve on, just tell me, I'd be really thankful. Now, the movie is short, I would've loved to make it longer, but I ended up having to cut the music in half and just finish it here, I just had to finish this quickly so that I can get rolled with my Power of Three team!

Aaaaaaaand... here's some dull stadistics:

- 1644 frames
- NO tweens at all.
- 24 Frames per second
- A minute and eight seconds long
- Music by blackattackbitch (http://blackattackbitch.
- A lot of love.
- Love for you too.

Thanks, enjoy!




Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Needs a Story

I read through some of the reviews on here and I agree that it needs a story. I loved that it was done over the loose leaf paper and I also really enjoyed the girl dancing at the beginning. I actually enjoyed the "unfinished" look with the animation.

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Rated 2 / 5 stars

Disappointing at best.

I am questioning my sanity right now, I cannot believe I bared through the whole flash.
To begin with, you really need to work on your composition, there is no real drama set up for this, and it all feels like the events are either rushed, or some scenes were just there to make it barely longer, either way, it all feels anticlimactic and boring, however, this is something I could totally overlook, but jesus christ is the animation horrible...You have what's probably the most choppy, unbalanced and ill-formed foreshortening and graphic development I've seen in a long while, or possibly ever in my short life. I never take the words "best", "worst" or "ever" lightly at all when reviewing something, and I think no one who uses them should be able to have the privilege to call themselves a critic, but I feel like a devilish hand just ripped them off my chest and plastered them onto this text box.
In one word, the motion animation was just...repulsive, but I could also go in-depth which only makes me feel worse. Not knowing your limitations is what pretty much ruins this and any other movie, if you can't tinker around with perspective and frame by frame, don't do it. Rule number one of B.A.S.E. jumping, my friend, you may be good, but you can't be good enough to jump without a parachute, and if you do it you'll look like an idiot, a dead idiot, that's why you don't do it. However, you keep trying to switch angles on FXF while you lack the anatomy, perspective and foreshortening skills to do it, so it ends up looking ill-consistent and just ugly. Lack of skill can be cause for it, but it also looks like all you've done for motion animation is rotoscope action anime shows, some of them which already rotoscope martial arts films (e.g. Nahreewtow fight scenes), and you're not even doing it right, so it all looses realism. However, you might not be rotoscoping and only be taking reference from those shows so I won't waste precious bits of data on in-depth and click "Submit Review!"


Rated 4 / 5 stars

Deep yet stupid.

The flash was beautiful. The style could have been better if it was one of those no background moving line things, but this works just as well. Why else would it be called PAPER flow?

It had a very good meaning that moved me. It was about death, and the love and tears someone had because of it. However, at the end I was un-moved when I remembered it was about breast cancer. Personally I do not care about that. Call me whatever you want it is a fact.

The music was also a plus for this flash. Classical does work wonders for the soul at times. I myself, am a metal man. One thing that did disturb me is that the female, who apparently died, was drawn like one of those little movable dolls.

This kind of creeped me out. Why can't she be drawn realistic like the man who I suppose is her husband. Perhaps I am thinking too much. I would have liked it better if it was simply about death and not cancer.

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Zyphonee responds:

The whole flash was random clips I started animating for the fuck of it :]


Rated 4 / 5 stars

Pretty Good

I enjoyed the music, the animation was nice and elegant. A bit rough and slow at times, but still very nice. I liked how you used the resource of that paper background. It's a different approach but a very good one.

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Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Well, not bad..

The video wasn't bad, however it wasn't my cup of tea, but on to the review!

The art style is a bit...weird, however good in it's own way. The use of the wrinkled sheet of notebook paper was a nice touch though. The music was good, and the whole plot of the animation was confusing, however given thought it's understandable.


I'm not saying it's bad, just like I said, not my cup of tea. But I don't see any reason to give it a low rating for that.

Keep up the good work!

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Zyphonee responds:

haha thanks man, I really aprettiate you're review, although dude, if it isn't your "cup of tea" gimme a lower score so that I can make it better on my next movie, once again, thanks for the review, good luck!