Score: 8

"Deep yet stupid."

by: letiger

date: December 15, 2009

The flash was beautiful. The style could have been better if it was one of those no background moving line things, but this works just as well. Why else would it be called PAPER flow?

It had a very good meaning that moved me. It was about death, and the love and tears someone had because of it. However, at the end I was un-moved when I remembered it was about breast cancer. Personally I do not care about that. Call me whatever you want it is a fact.

The music was also a plus for this flash. Classical does work wonders for the soul at times. I myself, am a metal man. One thing that did disturb me is that the female, who apparently died, was drawn like one of those little movable dolls.

This kind of creeped me out. Why can't she be drawn realistic like the man who I suppose is her husband. Perhaps I am thinking too much. I would have liked it better if it was simply about death and not cancer.

Score: 8

"Pretty Good"

by: Calintz

date: October 27, 2009

I enjoyed the music, the animation was nice and elegant. A bit rough and slow at times, but still very nice. I liked how you used the resource of that paper background. It's a different approach but a very good one.

Score: 9

"Well, not bad.."

by: Bongun

date: August 26, 2009

The video wasn't bad, however it wasn't my cup of tea, but on to the review!

The art style is a bit...weird, however good in it's own way. The use of the wrinkled sheet of notebook paper was a nice touch though. The music was good, and the whole plot of the animation was confusing, however given thought it's understandable.

9/10
4/5

I'm not saying it's bad, just like I said, not my cup of tea. But I don't see any reason to give it a low rating for that.

Keep up the good work!

Score: 10

"I never got around to reviewing this"

by: Magical-Zorse

date: August 20, 2009

I thought it was really cool. The background gave it a sort of foreboding feeling which fit right in with the animation, which was incredibly detailed. Nice job!

Score: 0

"What was that?"

by: Saberpower

date: July 27, 2009

Well, that was just incredibly random and not in a good way like most Newgrounds funny flashes. It seems you draw decently but this flash as a whole was just awful. Your frame rate seems to be a bit too low because the animation isn't all that smooth. I see waaaay too much cheating (not putting the in-betweens). The background may be one that you can call interesting but it adds nothing to the animation. If you were going to waste a person's time at least do it with a better plot. Your body ratios are also a bit off and are actually quite bothersome to look at.

The only thing I can really complement you at was shading and the fact that this looks like it was done fbf (although that might be why the animation was a bit rough).