Score: 6

"Decent"

by: Calintz

date: October 27, 2009

It's all right. I personally felt like not much effort was put into this flash. Although I am not surprised it passed judgment. Taking clips from shows, and dubbing them is yes, funny. But just doesn't seem to cut it in "talent" for me.

Regardless it was still pretty decent, like I said. I just hope in the future you decide to put more of your own work into the flash.

Keep working at it!

Cal.

Score: 6

"(title in work)"

by: milinko959

date: June 19, 2009

Heh, I thought this was pretty funny. At first I thought you doing all the voices, in what seemed to be a pretty impromptu fashion was going to bring this down, but I think you have talent in that aspect. Did you do this all in one audio recording or multiple ones? Of course, could have been longer, but I've already read that you hope to change that. Looking forward to another episode from you.

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Score: 5

"Very very short dub"

by: SCTE3

date: June 18, 2009

This turned out to be a little funny but in the future if you wish to submit more DUBs then please at least find a section that's a little longer and work on a script to go wit hit as well so it get's more humor, try to find parts that mix and match with the humor you are trying to aim at.

This was funny but more towards the middle of this short segment it just seemed to lose its humor overall. I look forward to seeing more DUBs from you.

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SCTE3

Score: 3

"A little short"

by: Coop83

date: June 13, 2009

I think if you're going to do dubbed movies that you need to get longer pieces and make the writing a lot better.

For me, the next logical step is to start taking these characters and trying to draw them yourself. It will take time, but gradually, you will be able to make a better Yu-Gi-Oh parody if it's something that's been drawn yourself, rather than poor quality video from other sources.

The voice acting was a little quiet and somewhat muffled. Perhaps adding another dimension to the project, by having voices that were vastly different to the original wasn't the way to go, who knows?

All in all, making a piece that is more your own work would be more beneficial to yourself and to the viewers. Increasing the length and possibly searching through lots of relevant fanfics to come up with some ideas will help your writing.

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Score: 4

"Wow sorry I didn't like it that much. :("

by: Fro

date: June 12, 2009

And I do hate giving reviews like this. First off be careful submitting things like this. It's theft for taking a movie and putting your stuff over it. It use to be allowed, but then it was discontinued. Knox always use to submit voiced over things and then there was a whole law suit thing and everything, etc.. So lesson is be very careful when doing something like this. You could get in trouble with the law.

~ Animation/Graphics ~

I think it would have been better if you did this as your own work such as recreating the scenes with your own artwork and animations or simply by putting some animation over the movie clip so you could count it as your own work slightly.

~ Story/Content ~

A little funny, but I didn't enjoy it too much. I think that if it was a minute or two longer then there would have been room for more jokes and more humor. Perhaps then I would have liked it a bit more.

~ Audio ~

Decent voice acting and the voices were synced up decently with the mouths movements, which I understand can be hard to do.

~ Overall ~

Be careful submitting something like this. A well done dub over, but to me it wouldn't be something I would submit unless I added animation and made it a bit longer.

Sorry for the bad review. :( You always give me good ones, but since this came through the RRC I had to be as honest as I could.

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