i know this isnt the 1st review thats said it but
good voice acting
animation needs work
and i recommend some type of background, just to give a setting
Author Comments
This is the almost final version of my Grapes of Wrath project for my English class. Its not meant to be insanely good or anything, as it was my first attempt at a full length flash production, and I only had 6 weeks to do the entire thing, while also doing all my other schoolwork. Feel free to give me advice for future animations though.
Hmmmm
It was kinda boring, and the animation wasnt too good,
But it was ok, not horrible, not great, just ok.
Good job :)
eeeey
i hear Josh's voice.
okay animation, spice it up a bit.
Good voice acting
Nice voice acting, but it would look better if the stick figures had some mouths. It got confusing as to who was talking. The completed version should be good.
not to bad
it was cool
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