Score: 8

"Nice animation"

by: link3740

date: September 25, 2009

the plot plays out like a bad fan fic

Score: 10

"YES!!!"

by: cloud959

date: July 24, 2009

Glad you're back man, and better than ever, too! This was AWESOME. The character models were great and the voice acting was too. Great job. :D

Score: 8

"good, work can be done though"

by: smashfrenzy

date: June 13, 2009

i voted a a 4, borderline 3. the voice acting can be polished up a little, its mostly good though. you should try to do as much as you can to decrease interference with the microphone because the rustling and static is pretty loud and detracting. i also suggest you use more music, which i realize you attempted to address in you comments, in the entire animation, especially the credits where it was left kind of hanging. otherwise, suprisingly smooth fight scenes and very visible effort. HAGS and good luck with the rest of the series!

Score: 7

"consistency plz"

by: doom-kettle

date: June 6, 2009

The series has improved a lot but there's still a long way to go. the art seems good and the shading works well however you need to put more effort in to keeping it consistent during animation. although the actual movement is good the characters tend to deform as they change position.
The lip syncing also needs work [the timing is good but the mouth just opens and closes without changing shape].
Another thing that bothers me about this is the facial expressions, often they don't portray the mood well or express character. an easy way to fix this would be to use more eye movement. Just changing the position of the pupils is enough to give a character a little extra depth sometimes.
Backgrounds are also an issue they just seem as if they should have more detail, I wouldn't recommend painted/imported ones just yet as they can take ages to create but just spending a little longer on them usually pays off.
the action sequences were good ,really smooth and you managed to pull off the rotoscoped parts well in this. the voice acting and writing was also up to standard and i look forward to seeing where this will go from here.

Score: 7

"Was'nt Bad"

by: devilmaycryfan1337

date: June 5, 2009

Needs a bit of work, though. I actually think the original was quite better. I couldn't see the better art work or graphics and I didn't really see anything different.