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I made this game in about 2 days
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Not too bad.
~ Animation/Graphics ~
This is where the submission really needs to improve in my opinion. Better graphics, which represented people with legs, arms, etc.. would have been much better in this case. I also think that it would have been better if your character faced the way he was walking. That was a big downfall in my opinion. Other than that the backgrounds weren't too bad.
~ Story/Content ~
Way too easy in my opinion. Some levels would be hard to try and lose. I liked later in the game when you made things harder by increasing the speed of the "enemies". I think if you would have made harder things to get around and more faster enemies then this would have been more fun. Another big downfall in the game.
Cars on the main highway would have been good and some of the guards that didn't move should have been walking to make it a little harder.
The joke at the end was alright. Kind of random point to a game I guess.
~ Audio ~
The song was great. I don't know if there was any more sound effects because I never got caught or anything like that.
~ Overall ~
Just making the game harder and greatly improving the animation/graphics would make this a decent game. Keep on working and perhaps take a couple more days time to make a game in the future so it turns out a little better. Good luck in the future.
~ Review Request Club ~
I think that the game itself needs some work, but the joke writing was funny, even if only for a relatively cheap laugh.
I think that some of the walls were too thin, with the way that you could push the dot of your character up to the wall and effectively pass through it part of the way. Asking a few questions in the flash forum or checking out a few game tutorials would help this piece immensely.
The final thing I would suggest is that you make some progress with what you use to represent the characters - put some arms on them, to make them look more like a person from the top down, for example. Making the arms and legs move would certainly make this look a lot better - perhaps try spending more time drawing the scenery, as that leaves a lasting impression on the people that view the flash and actually play the game.
Perhaps you need to make it morte of a challenge as well - I found it easy to complete, with minimal effort.
[Review Request Club]
Thank you for your review
the game itself wasnt good. it was way too easy bu the ending was nice. senial impossible XD
ok ok i give it a 9
i do that only cause of the ending. i just really didnt see that ending comming, that was so bad but in like and M KNight Shamalon way
i liked the end....but it was a little dumb. the music was awesome. your game was simple but then again simple isnt bad. the only complaint i have is that it was too short. if you make another keep up the good work
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