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First flash hope you enjoy!
Vote 5 and stuff lol
This is just introducing my 2 characters
Fizz and Fazz
It was funny but animation can be better
There's potential here * MOST DEFFENANTLY!!!*
You have great potential. I love use of the hydrogen bombs and how the animation was. The package was small and fast loading, yet yeilded *a very long length. i must say i love it!!! If this was you first flash you can make it far, hell you might work for a cartoon company. Keep it up!
There's potential here
You went to the trouble of actually animating something, which is more than I can say for some people here. And I can definitely see some budding talent. What's needed here is more practice and foundation. Instead of doing short little bits, try making a storyboard for a full episode - a storyline that Fizz and Fazz can follow. (Example: Fizz and Fazz are hungry and go out to get a burger. It's supposed to be a one-minute drive. But throw some comedy in between, and you've got five minutes of hilarious hijinks.)
Be sure to take advantage of Flash's layering ability; backgrounds would help you a lot. Do some research on how to get better sound and recording.
Overall, not bad for your first submission. I give this a 2 and a 4. (And while we're on the subject, don't panhandle for fives; it makes you look bad.) Keep working on this; I see a lot of good things here, and with practice and effort you'll only get better.
It was alright
it was funny in some parts... in some parts i thought the thing ended cuz the character stopped moving -_-.... you have some decent bits in there, i would say clean up the characters a bit (as in the artwork) even if your not gonna add color... you might not even need color
it is funny guy keep on this videos for the first flash is very godd
hahahaXD what a funny video
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