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The buttons are lowered so they can be seen
Needs a lot of work.
I had no idea what to expect opening this Flash. Your title could mean anything and your description didn't help. This didn't hurt the Flash, but you should be aware of it for next time.
Anyway, I had a couple problems with this, I'm sorry to say. The music really assaults you and I had a glitch where it started a couple times, making it so bad I had to restart the tutorial. Definitely fix that. Also add a button to stop the music. People can turn their speakers off, but it looks much better to supply a button for that yourself. It looks like you put more time into the Flash, though the button only takes a couple seconds of work.
There were no back buttons during the drawing tutorial which is not good for something where people will likely be making a lot of mistakes and need to look back. The steps at some times seemed very uneven, either showing too much or too little progression. Think about the natural steps when drawing the character, and try to translate that.
Some information was cut out of frame. This can be fixed by going into the properties of your Flash and selecting the "Match: Contents" option.
Fix the errors and you'll definitely get a higher score.
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It sucks sorry. I have to say it xD Jak's tut is a little better because his actually works.
Your whole thing is offset by a bit on the left and doesn't appear in a pop-up.
Is the whole piece centered on the stage? Or I guess you could just make the stage wider.
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