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A friend made a commercial script for his LA project, so for fun, I made his commercial come to life! Animating isn't really my strong point, but I did the best job i could.
Not your strong point?
If flash isn't your strong point, and you don't really try at it, you will get bad ratings. If you said, this is my first flash, hope you like it, I might think you are going to do better next time.
3/10-Voice lags behind text, text runs too quickly, voice not Loud enough, poor animations which look to have been done in 2 hrs. (which explains the amount of effort put into it). I'm rating you by the other flashes I've seen, even though you just did this for a buddy. If I made a quick flash for a buddy, I'd share it with him, not the whole world-unless I thought it was "cool."
GJ on your little flick there. You want a ten, fix the mistakes, and put at least 3 days into this, make me want to buy Rush. Instead of saying all of those stores, say, "Your nearest convenience store." Maybe you did it for humor, but the tone in your voice made you sound bland. Speak it faster.
sound was faint
sound and animation was off sync
no replay button
this isn't too bad. because it was so short and had no replay button, i didn't give it to good of a score. plus, it was off sync. maybe if you had a little explosive music, it could liven up the flash. so, make it longer, sync it up, slightly louder and clearer, and add some music and your next commercial like flash will be perfect. plus, don't forget the replay button.
your voice over was very drab and there was zero animation. Common, liven it up a little!
the last part.... yeah THAT was funny [The side effects & phone no.]
but still the animation needs a lot more GRAPHICAL jokes in it; and not only text.
Funny crazy energy drink
I think george bush was on this
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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