Score: 7
"It wasn't bad."
date: September 30, 2009
The story was well put, however, the fight was good too, but it just seems it was ripped off from Proxicide (MK v SF creator). Also, the smiley face wasn't really necessary, it was too cheesy because if a person saves someone's life, there's no smiles to it. That smiley really did spoil it for me.
Your flash was good, but it lacked creativity, depth, and originality. Still, you didn't a fine job.
I'll give you a 9 for smoothness, but a 5 for depth.
Hope to see more in the future.
P.S. Also, if you want, I can upload this on to YouTube.
-aznpikachu215