It has moxy and shows promise
Timing and animation could use refinement, and the story could get fleshed out a bit more (couldn't tell why things were happening). But it definitely has promise. Was pretty campy and entertaining.
Author Comments
Well this is my first flash. I made it about my original character Dark Margy. Also other friends characters are in it. Well this is about Margy stalking and spying, fighting with a Ninja wannabe and also you will see the dark side of Margy with one of her revenge. This flash is short but I hope u like it.
Thanks for watch!
Margyann responds:
I know what you mean It was very random xD but thanks
Cool
good can not believe its your first time!!!
Margyann responds:
Thank you for the 7 :)
Timber
You get a 6 for the ff8 tune at the start alone :D Animation wasn't so great but there's good deal of effort put into it.
Margyann responds:
haha thank you but i think it was a good animation to be my first one :D but thanks for comment I will try to get better. :)
Haha Funny
This is Very good for a First flash, funny, well animated, can't wait to see more from you.
;)
Margyann responds:
Thank you and thanks to you is good. You are my master of flash hehehehehe :D